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SONY ILCE-6700E 17-70mm F2.8 B07017mm(25mm 相当)f/3.21/1600ISO 100-1.3 EV3674×5511 (20.2 MP)
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You have a genuinely strong social image here: the donkey’s huge face, ears, and curious expression make an instant stop-and-smile hook. The wide-angle closeness works because it exaggerates personality without losing the farm setting. The one thing still holding it back is that the background donkeys remain recognizable enough to tug attention away from the main face, especially on a phone. I would make only a restrained background pass now — don’t keep stacking global punch.
3秒スクロールテスト合格
The oversized donkey face and direct animal curiosity are immediately readable, funny, and strong enough to stop a general viewer in a fast feed.
メインボトルネック
The main limiter is subject separation: the background donkeys are blurred, but their ears, faces, and similar warm tones still compete with the near donkey because the viewer’s eye follows recognizable animal shapes before it settles on tonal hierarchy.
ベストの状態
At its best, this becomes a clean, funny vertical feed image where the near donkey’s face dominates instantly and the herd behind reads only as soft context. The final version should keep the warm farm palette and big-eyed charm while letting the background fall one step quieter.
クロップ提案
2:3Trim the bottom and right sides.
A 4:5 Instagram/Pinterest crop keeps the comic face large on mobile while preserving the full-body farm context.
Adobe Lightroomで適用する:
目標値：スライダーをこれらの位置に設定してから、目で見て微調整してください。すべての調整が全ての画像に適用されるわけではありません。
背景
- →Keep the background believable, but make the supporting donkeys read as context rather than secondary subjects.
- →Do not add more global contrast or texture; the file already has enough punch for social use.
- •Select Background mask excluding front donkey — Texture: -10 to -16
- •Select Background mask excluding front donkey — Clarity: -10 to -16
- •Select Background mask excluding front donkey — Saturation: -6 to -10
- •Brush mask over background donkeys only — Exposure: -0.10 to -0.25, Feather 70-90
レタッチのヒント
Add a very subtle Radial Gradient centered on the near donkey’s face with Exposure +0.05 to +0.12 and Feather 80-100, then subtract the sky and muzzle highlights so the lift lands mainly on the eyes and forehead rather than brightening the whole frame.
主な強み3つの強み
- The near donkey’s oversized muzzle and ears create an immediate comic hook that reads even at phone-thumbnail size.
- The low, close camera position gives the animal personality and makes the viewer feel physically inside the scene.
- The warm brown coat against blue-grey sky and green field forms a simple, social-friendly palette.
スコアの内訳7.9
芸術的インパクト
8.1
The image has a clear social payload: curious donkey face, exaggerated perspective, and a playful farmyard encounter.
テクニカルメリット
7.6
The near donkey’s eyes and muzzle read sharp at this viewing size, with good fur texture across the face; because this is a downscaled analysis copy, verify the eyes at 100% before making a final export.
編集での伸びしろ推定上限 8.4
編集だけで到達できる最高スコアの推定であって、実際の編集がどこまで届くかの予測ではありません。
With a restrained background separation pass and a social-friendly 4:5 crop, this can become a stronger feed image, but it is already near its realistic editing ceiling; the remaining gain is polish, not transformation.
この写真が伝えること
Playful curiosity, created by the donkey’s close face, direct gaze, oversized ears, and the bright open field behind it.
創造的な実験
Try a carousel pairing this close comic portrait with a wider environmental frame of the herd; for accessibility, alt text could read: “A curious donkey leans close to the camera in a grassy field, with two donkeys blurred behind.”
撮影のヒント3件のヒント
- 1.For this kind of close animal portrait, keep using the wide end — 17mm gave you the exaggerated muzzle and ears that make the image work.
- 2.At f/3.2 and 1/1600, you had plenty of shutter speed; if the animals are calm next time, try f/2.8 to soften the background donkeys a little more while keeping focus locked on the nearer eye.
- 3.The eyes read sharp at this scale, but before posting or printing, check the near donkey’s eyes at 100%; if they are not the crispest plane, reshoot with single-point AF placed directly on the nearer eye.
ソーシャルフック
Lead with the feeling that this donkey clearly had questions for the photographer.
総合評価動物ポートレートレーン一貫性: 94%
vertical, funny, instantly readable animal portrait
コンセプト
- The image has a clear social payload: curious donkey face, exaggerated perspective, and a playful farmyard encounter.
- The supporting donkeys add context and charm, though they also compete slightly with the main face at small sizes.
- This is not a subtle image, which is good for the lane — the humor and subject recognition are immediate.
テクニカル
- The near donkey’s eyes and muzzle read sharp at this viewing size, with good fur texture across the face; because this is a downscaled analysis copy, verify the eyes at 100% before making a final export.
- Exposure is well controlled: the sky is held without meaningful clipping, and the white muzzle retains texture rather than blowing out.
- The palette is credible and cohesive — warm tan/brown fur, muted green grass, and soft blue-grey sky — with no obvious accidental color cast. Midtones are mostly separated, though the background donkeys sit close enough in tone and shape to the subject that they slightly dilute the hierarchy.
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